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Awesome poll. Nice!! :lol: TG

AWESOME!!! :D TG

Who the F*** Pat Buchanan!! I need to know! :D TG

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Awesome! :roll: I really liked it. The style was wonderful. The short paragraphs and almost complete dialog really did it. It kept me interested, and I kept wanting to read ...

Nice! :D I like it, no problems here. Keep it up!

Loved the wording. :D I gave me a great image of the poem. Nice job! :mrgreen:

I agree with Rachet Writer, is a great short story, and not much room for corrections. :D Although, I don't see how you would continue, but think of some ways ...

OK, heres my drift. :D It was very good, one of the few stories I actually read (I usually read poems because I can stay awake long enough to finish ...

To many boxes. :? I was good, but a little repetitive. I didn't see any mistakes, which is good. Maybe you should put the box lines together. :? :)

Only a few non-rhyming mistakes in some of the lines. Overall, I love poems like this. Very good job. :)

I became very hungry while reading :) :lol: It was a good piece, though I have to side with the above. Very abstract and strange. :? :)

Wonderful! I was so romantic, I loved the first couple of stanzas. I didn't see anything wrong, but then again, I suck at poetry, so I don't know whats good ...

I liked how it rhymed, and the style. It was short, a little to short. Maybe if you had added some more, it would have been just right. But other ...

Hard to critique, but it was a nice piece. It kind of confused me at some points, but that didn't make it bad. :? :)